last dance

small shuffled steps whispering as one,
to the rhythm of a three snare beat
echoing secrets that can't be sung,
they speak of a world you long to meet

but words seem to flow,
from lips that never spoke
about the heart made of glass,
is about to be shattered and broke

hold my hand and take me away,
to a place for you and me

before the song and music dies,
spread the wings that yearn to fly,
discard all that confuses the mind
into the wind thats perfect

for a waltz in the air tonight


just something i had to let out.

the 2 days i spent working on this frustrated me but it came out okay

i'm glad

crits welcome

alone in the universe tonight

would you taste the delusions of my mind
can you hear, how Melancholy screams
or have you seen the tears that cry
did you feel the lonely winds stroll by,
and the smell of a gemini

Oh, that were just thoughts i have inside
just wondering, if i'm all alone in the universe tonight.




just feeling neglected and confused these few days,




anyway... Alone in the universe is actually a song by David Usher

and his lyrics are so much better

but i just wanted to have my own universe tonight =)

moment of inspiration.

blistered fingers, six strings of steel
ignoring pain and and all that is real,
resonating splendour,
for the wounds the heal




i remember when i came up with this...it was after playing on my guitar, my finger tips had deep grooves dented into them by the strings.

blistered fingers. an exaggeration haha... oh and i play on a classical guitar ;)

then splendour came next, because i was really intoxicated with playing the arpeggio i had came up with. it just kept me going and going ignoring time and all that was on my mind


that picture of cheer is just an overkill to look at while i was revising the lines

i put it up on msn and people were commenting on that...

my ego felt good.. in a motivating way...lalala


but really, the way i was inspired was not familiar at all..... i would have never have allowed myself to follow on but i just thought ah what the heck lets try! there you go