宇宙的神密，宁静星空
夜晚的华丽，倒影在湖中
一手的流星，尽在掌里绕
放不下是感情，和爱情的美妙
流失的梦，放纵去追
离别的人，如何挽回
留不住的星，早已模糊
你的脸，还是一样清楚
ok my first time experimenting with chinese
criticism is most welcome
though the 'modest boy friend' did not inspire much lol
i could not think of a title so haha there it is...
i've a few more unfinished but gimme some time
i'm a slow worker
Travis
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已流失的梦， 怎么放纵去追？
追着韵律，失去了含意
i particularly loved that phrase because its the only personal string of words i hid in the poem
though it sounds exaggerated but its a mindset i adopt, the never say die kind... heh thats me
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